My first attempt, written fairly quickly and without much idea of what it would be about. My first draft, I mean my first draft before I hit the delete key, came in at over 100 words. Because of this I had to make a few cuts, alter the story to get it under 51.

"David just wanted friends." by D'baser

David Smith, he had no friends, nobody wanted to be with him. They called him boring, dumbass and four eyes…his workmates were so mean and nasty. But David had something they didn’t have, a colt 45. They screamed and they begged for mercy; “Who’s four eyes now!?” said David.

So what do you think?