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I got this idea from the Terry Pratchett website, via Babayaga's Hut. You have to write a story using exactly 50 words, not including the title. It helps if you write it in word or similar so you can use the 'word count' to keep checking and altering.

The Great Escape, by Jonathan Malory.

Everything in place, the night sky clear; spangled with glittering pinpricks of hope. The full moon lit the way to freedom, their breaths steamed in the springtime air as the grass over the fence waved to them.
Slowly, full of anticipation, the sheep turned to each other and glared silently.

Buzz; that rush that fills you up... the heat rises and the adrenalin pumps, your head whirls and your eyes roll into the back of your head… your jaw tightens… you peak… nothings better, nothing can come close to this amazing brilliant feeling… everything’s beautiful, you feel it intensely – ecstasy!

I thought maybe I would write about something intense. **Gingerly awaits the onslaught of disapproval** Let me know what you think anyway... Cat xcx

no disapproval here... :hippie:

She pushed the door slowly, scared of what she might find. A slightly stale smell filled the darkened room. Her fingers fumbling, something slimy and wet touched her leg. She was filled with dread...oh what horror...yet she know she had to start and clean her teenage sons room.

The End, there that makes 50 Nice little story too

Heres one I made earlier:

Twas a cold harsh day that fell upon the town. Gales like you’ve never seen before, a huge roar of thunder bellowed down with lightning as its wicked accomplice. I am strong, fearless, I can defeat this evil, evil what I hear you say?
The evil of the...................................Mother-in-laws visit !!!!

Its probably crap but hey ho

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Saucey Horse

not at all, it's good; I like it! It's all about imagery; the thunder with lightening as its evil accomplice is great

Why ty I'll try and do a better one next time tho

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Saucey Horse

we must strive for perfection eh? Now I sound like Harold Bishop

Not striving for perfection Harold ..............only to improve

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Saucey Horse