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Well i had the idea of writing a story when nathan (aka Dark Angel) was thinking of writing a story.
Like Dark angel said, just tell me what you think of the story.
Its on this web page at http://www.meaningofdreams.org/Miles_Morrison/
its only the start bit but just tell me what you think.

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I'm liking it, its like a mixture of Devil May Cry and.............something else

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I like it, otherwise I wouldn't have put it up there.

Ii just sent you chapter one maljonic, what do you think?

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Why won't anyone join my Pen15 club?

It's up there now for everyone to read, I quite like it. As I said in my email: There's some nice imagery in your story, the last line in this chapter is good, using the drowning and the water (indirectly as rain) in the sentence like that.

I just got that email bounced back to me by the way, so perhaps this is the first time you read what I wrote?

Thanks, i hope people enjoy it because thats what i wrote it for
well the next bit should be done within the next 2 weeks. This is atcually the first time I have really wrote a story and alot of its represents points in my life. If you look in the story i have also tryed to use the contrast of light and dark but it did'nt come across very well lol

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Why won't anyone join my Pen15 club?