That's cool, you don't need to explain everything in a story all at once; it could be one of those things that becomes obvious as we go along, or mentioned somewhere discreetly in the text at a later date.

I know. I just want to make everything clear.

I like surprises.

How's chapter 3, most importantly hows the story.

Personally I think it's great.

I thought it was excellent

I have to agree with Smiley it does sound an awful lot like Runescape. I know how the story ends by the way and it's a good ending, as I have travelled foreward in time and read it. But can someone please find a use for my power over pancakes...

Everyone on this site plz note that timelord is one of my mad friends at school.

1. He is not a time lord, he just acts like it

2. He does not no the ending to my story

3. IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH RUNESCAPE

But if he acts like a timelord, maybe he is a timelord; maybe he's making you think he's acting like a timelord so you never suspect that that's exactly what he is?

Hello Timelord by the way; I fixed your avatar picture, is that the right picture you were trying to use?

I don't know anything about timelords or runescape,
but I enjoyed your story