I have been writing a story called Angel Of Shadows. Thanks to maljonic, you can read it http://www.meaningofdreams.org/Nathan_Wood/.
I'll post on new chapters when I've done them. Read it and see what you think.

Very good, it sounds a little like runescape, or maybe ive been playing that a bit much lately. :P

Loads of people have said that. IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH IT!!!!!!!!!

That's probably because they don't read books and the only thing they can equate it to is Runescape, because that's all they do with their spare time.

I think it's great. I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.

The next chapter is nearly ready. Burns On The Soul

The new chapter is now on my page. Check it out and see what you think

I like it alot. I want to know how Raven got the yellow gem in the first place.

I was wondering that, is it something special or is it the kind of thing everyone has? Or maybe we just have to wait and see?

Sorry I forgot to mention. Its a light gem, when you enchant e na ecanea it will glow out beams of light, its one of the invention made by Rytner that him and Raven always carry round on thier journeys in case of emergencys. If you have anymore questions, dont hesitate to ask me.